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Review: Real Emotion Chapter 4AN: Due 2 populer demand, I ran Eternity through teh Mary Sue test. Here is the result:Review: Real Emotion Chapter 4
"You may have let yourself get a little too close to Eternity. Maybe she's you as you wish you were, or maybe you're just afraid no one will like her and are trying to give her a free ride. Have some confidence in your writing! Eternity is a good character. Give her room to be herself before you stifle her."
See? Shes a GOOD character! If u guys dont stop flaming me Im going 2 do something drastic!!!!
Panda here! I get the joy of doing the first chapter we had to take from fanfiction. Seriously? I don’t even thin
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Review: Real Emotion 3AN: Thx 2 the person who likes it!! As 4 the rest of u, u can all go $%@& urselfs!!Review: Real Emotion 3
Lit here, it’s my turn to review first! To begin: Thuh-x? It should be thanks and 2 should be two, y’know. Kind of like how you write like a two-year-old. You haven’t even made it from 4 to four, yet… U is a letter not a word; the word form is “you”, as in “you daft dweeb”. Get it? I certainly hope so. And why would we want to dollar-percent-at-and “yourselves”, but, I’m sorry, I used the correct spellings and grammar.
Panda’s here~ Anyways, &
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Review: Real Emotion Chapter 2Lookie! Chapter 2! I’ll be reviewing first this time! And to all our readers; don’t lose too many brain cells reading this!Review: Real Emotion Chapter 2
I had to read multiple textbooks after this story! It truly does rot your brain; even more than TV does!
AN: It appears I'm going 2 get flamed on here as well. But oh well, I really dont give a flying @#&$. I realize my grammer is bad in these first few chapters, but now I have my sister beta-reading it 4 me!!! Here is the second chapter...
What would ever give you that idea? Everyone I know completely loves this story! They tell me so in private messages! :D And you spell
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Review: Real Emotion Chapter 1Hello, Lit (LiteraryArtist) here! We’ll now begin Reviewing hannahchan554's “Real Emotion Chapter 1”. This story possesses the worst grammar, punctuation, spelling and most obvious Mary-Sue character so far!Review: Real Emotion Chapter 1
And it’s me! Panda~ (xevilxpandax) This is gonna be funs! And Lit’s wrong. My Immortal is the worst story. But that’s not the point.
AN: This is my new sotry. Well, its not so new now, it has 8 chapters on fanfiction. net, but some1 is threatening 2 report meh!!!1 So on the off chance that it gets taken down, I will atleast have a copy of it on this site!!!
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mary-sue test .:updated:.this test was made for people who write fanfictions featuring their OC`s [original characters] wishing to avoid creating mary-sues. You can test as many characters as you want :] remember: no offensemary-sue test .:updated:.
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1. Does your character has a long, rare or unusual name? [if she lives in japan, japanese name is not unusual] +1
2. Does your character has more than one first/second name for no reason? +1
3. [count all that apply]
She`s not a human? +1 Half a human? +1 [half]An Angel? +1 [half]A Vampire? +1
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